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Temptation of Evil 28 by spawnfan Temptation of Evil 28 by spawnfan
A new story, one without TG. Magical Girl Super Hiroko-chan battles her nemesis Dark Queen Yamiya for the last time. Thank you :icongabepuratekuta: for coming up with their names.

A moment of silence for Hiroko's unnamed boyfriend..............................................


 My god he died horribly, I'm a bad person. :lol:  A lot of you speculated he might become her servant, her female servant or a new magical girl, but no this was always to be his fate.  And this will not be the last life she destroys....

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:iconashk1980:
AshK1980 Featured By Owner Dec 8, 2013
Why did you decide to turn her evil? Just curious.
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spawnfan Featured By Owner Dec 8, 2013  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
I watched a video called "Black Dress Temptation" and it has a magical girl defeat her rival and then try on her clothes and get turned on by it, but then the evil villains returns in spirit form and has lesbian sex with her, humiliates her and basically breaks her to her will. 

I wanted to do something different where she is seduced by the power and not magic mind control sex.


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AshK1980 Featured By Owner Dec 8, 2013
It's still a good job. I wonder who will battle her now.
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oogawege Featured By Owner Dec 5, 2013
I bet Zod's displeased. The guy knelt and everything before her! That's a perfectly good human wasted...ah, who am I kidding? Zod would probably do the same thing. Just look at that evil power!
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CutePuppet Featured By Owner Dec 5, 2013
Oh my god.... the poor sweet boy Q.Q
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xYuu-chan Featured By Owner Dec 4, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
Little fucker should be eternally grateful that his Dark Queen was gracious enough to slay him herself ;3

All hail the Dark Queen ^^
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mathmeistro Featured By Owner Dec 4, 2013
PHILIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIP!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!1
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LittleMissTG Featured By Owner Dec 4, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
I-I think he is ok its could be just a light burn... *pokes him and he crumbles away* nope he is dead, I am pretty sure of it
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OjouTsuki Featured By Owner Dec 4, 2013
Well, this doesn't rule out turning him into some material.
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Jteam6 Featured By Owner Dec 4, 2013  Student Artist
damn...
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MegamanMaster64 Featured By Owner Dec 4, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
wow that sucks for her boyfriend. looks like hiroko is gone and Dark Queen Yamiya is reborn.
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:iconspawnfan:
spawnfan Featured By Owner Dec 4, 2013  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
Dark Queen Hiroko actually.
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:iconmegamanmaster64:
MegamanMaster64 Featured By Owner Dec 5, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
oh whoops my bad. Dark queen hiroko rises. now who will combat the threat?
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Benje10 Featured By Owner Dec 4, 2013
well that was harsh, but what do you expect from a "Dark Queen"
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a1993 Featured By Owner Dec 4, 2013
well... if she ever does turn back, good luck dealing with that guilt...
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TheGuyWhoReviewGames Featured By Owner Dec 4, 2013
whoa...that was....dark....
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killerkris113 Featured By Owner Dec 4, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
Hiroko is truly gone. All that is left is the Dark Queen... and I LOVE IT~ True evil is an awesome thing when done for things other then sex (like in the series this is based on.)
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joremias Featured By Owner Dec 4, 2013  Hobbyist Artist
Villians have usually different interests and territories. It would be interesting to see a battle between evil vs evil XD
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joremias Featured By Owner Dec 4, 2013  Hobbyist Artist
So, she didinīt remeber  her late boyfriend. I guess she would destroy one or two cities before this new dark lady meets her end. 

She wasnīt to smart to avoid corruption, so i think she wonīt avoid several raids of heroes/anti-heroes/and probably some villians who abhor comeptition.
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joremias Featured By Owner Dec 4, 2013  Hobbyist Artist
grammar again u.u
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nightwerewolf16 Featured By Owner Dec 4, 2013
damn... that got dark real quick
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Bisected8 Featured By Owner Dec 4, 2013  Hobbyist Artisan Crafter
Ooo, that's dark. :o
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machievelli Featured By Owner Dec 4, 2013
Ah, shoot first and don't even bother to ask the questions. As long as I'm not her boyfriend or father, I can deal with it...
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GobboKilla Featured By Owner Dec 4, 2013  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
WUT?
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alruna12345678 Featured By Owner Dec 4, 2013
Who would of know that Hiroko knew how to use a whip 
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oogawege Featured By Owner Dec 5, 2013
As the Book of Booji Boy proclaims, "a whip shall be allowed to be used any time there is a problem, especially in the case of spoiled cream. Unless a whip is used, the person the problem is affecting will never be able to hear the end of it."
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LoZCollector Featured By Owner Dec 4, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
Alright, THAT'S IT! This has officially passed magical girl territory! I'm calling in the big guns!

Hiroko-san, you have three seconds to repent!  Three!  Two!  One!

Fairy Law!

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oogawege Featured By Owner Dec 5, 2013
That song is not epic enough for how it was described in the manga. I thought it would make a large "FWWAAAAAAAAHHHH" Wushi finger hold epic death-fart explosion. That just made it sound like a special summon in Final Fantasy!

Regardless, I do enjoy the reference, and have heard good things about the anime. Better than the kiddy-pandering mess/One Piece anime knockoff that was the Rave Master anime...
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syzygym Featured By Owner Dec 3, 2013
Uh.........
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coredumperror Featured By Owner Dec 3, 2013
Yiiiiiikes!
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nartraxes Featured By Owner Dec 3, 2013
o_o spawn......your heading down a dark path my friend 
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spawnfan Featured By Owner Dec 3, 2013  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
I did warn everyone it was going to a dark place.
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megaman0591 Featured By Owner Dec 3, 2013
... Oh dear. I'm not cleaning up THAT mess! :iconyao-mingplz:
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jaimehlers Featured By Owner Dec 3, 2013
And this is why I detest evil.  99% of the time, it's about doing whatever you please just because you can.
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ThelVadum Featured By Owner Dec 3, 2013
EEEEEEVIIIIIILLLLL!  Muahhahahahahahha.... I love the charred body in the flames, you drew that very well.
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:iconspawnfan:
spawnfan Featured By Owner Dec 3, 2013  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
Thanks. That was the key element in this, so I'm very glad I got it right.
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TheRealYuma Featured By Owner Dec 3, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
Time to send in the cavalry.
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luminoustrance Featured By Owner Dec 3, 2013
:jawdrop: ...fuck.

Oh, you meant EVIL evil.
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jonathankimmel Featured By Owner Dec 3, 2013
up he's next lol
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Undertaker972 Featured By Owner Dec 3, 2013
oh my, that went even darker than i thought
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:icontaigan:
Taigan Featured By Owner Dec 3, 2013
Between this and the Cinderella epilogue, you've had some dark depressing s**t lately. :/
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:iconspawnfan:
spawnfan Featured By Owner Dec 3, 2013  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
I broke it up with a perky cute cheerleader in between. :)
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Jack-O-Lance Featured By Owner Dec 3, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
She killed him, huh? I guess it could've been worse! (Never ask how it can be worse or else it will get worse! :mwahaha: )
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MKalut Featured By Owner Dec 3, 2013
Wow this is an unpleasant flash back to episode 5 of "Marvel's Agents of S.H.E.I.L.D."  She didn't even have the decency to let him beg.  Well this potentially makes critical mistake number 2 for her (never waste a potential resource).  (Sigh) Oh well her loss as she could have corrupted his feelings for her to get her first evil lieutenant.  However if she makes her monsters from the ashes of her victims than it is not a total loss just the loss of an intelligent servant (which are few and far between).
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SailorDolly Featured By Owner Dec 3, 2013
On the other hand, letting him beg and stall for time could have been disastrous as well if he were given time to formulate a plan or for the cavalry to arrive. Sometimes it is better to shoot first and ask questions never.
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MythicEnder Featured By Owner Dec 3, 2013
O_O FATALITY
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nobody-kadaj Featured By Owner Dec 3, 2013
Tearing her house apart while she goes power mad is one thing. Killing her boyfriend in cold blood just because she can is another thing entirely. I fear she has crossed the moral event horizon with this deed and shall now be forever more trapped within its confines.

I wonder if she had any other companions who fought alongside her against evil?
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JanusDaGuardian42 Featured By Owner Dec 3, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
Well, I guess that's proof enough how far gone Hiroko-chan is. *Nods* Let's hope that wasn't the last magical girl in town, or else everyone's screwed...   
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MKalut Featured By Owner Dec 3, 2013
There's still the remaining half of her scepter that she foolishly chose to throw away.  So I'd say that there is a strong possibility that some poor oblivious boy is about to find himself sporting a new pair of "shock-absorbers" all it would take is another writer/artist to take over for that part of the story.
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JanusDaGuardian42 Featured By Owner Dec 3, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
If I got permission from Spawnfan, *Shrugs* I'd probably take that idea up. It sounds fairly simple to formulate, considering my usual choice of writing material. *Nods*  

Also, "shock-absorbers". I think there was a Mech anime floating around on youtube somewhere in which a doctor suggested that very concept. I think it was one of those non-canon(?) Evangelion productions. In any case, they put a guy in a ladie's mech jumpsuit, which came with a face and voice distorter built into the helmet. Fun stuff. :)      
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