Shop Mobile More Submit  Join Login
Temptation of Evil 25 by spawnfan Temptation of Evil 25 by spawnfan
A new story, one without TG. Magical Girl Super Hiroko-chan battles her nemesis Dark Queen Yamiya for the last time. Thank you :icongabepuratekuta: for coming up with their names.

Goodbye Hiroko Chan, Hello Dark Queen Hiroko.  Beware, things are going to get dark very soon... 

Previous: Temptation of Evil 24 by spawnfan Next: Temptation of Evil 26 by spawnfan
Add a Comment:
 
:iconbleureptorskitt:
BleuReptorSkitt Featured By Owner Nov 8, 2013
this story becomes one of my favorit spawnfan storys

but i dont think the name hiroko fits her anymore

on the last sides she have started to destroy the remeining thinks of her old lief (the staff and the forniture of her room)
will she now trying to get reid off her boyfrend (evry magical girl have on) because she dosent look for me like somone the can love anyone exebt her self
Reply
:iconon2xsecretprobation:
On2XSecretProbation Featured By Owner Nov 7, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
Uh...whips are the standard weapons of queens?
Reply
:iconmkalut:
MKalut Featured By Owner Nov 7, 2013
Apparently they are for scantly dressed evil ones.
Reply
:iconon2xsecretprobation:
On2XSecretProbation Featured By Owner Nov 7, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
Fashion isn't really my thing...
Reply
:icontherealyuma:
TheRealYuma Featured By Owner Nov 6, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
A whip? :laughing: She'll need something more powerful than that.
Reply
:iconmkalut:
MKalut Featured By Owner Nov 6, 2013
Ah yes new weapons befitting a villain.  I wonder what the other half will turn into.  Although turning it into a simple whip provides her a whole new set of problems.  1. Probable loss of most if not all magic powers from the scepter.  2. She likely lacks the training to use it as a proper weapon and I doubt that Indiana Jones will give her lessons.  3. A scepter is one of the biggest symbols of royal power so she gave up a huge amount of symbolic power which in the magic business usually translates to power that has a great deal of practical uses.

WAIT I just noticed the no TG part in the comment.  NOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOO is there no boy out there who could be forced to replace Hiroko as a magical girl?  Time to put out the help wanted signs.
Reply
:iconspawnfan:
spawnfan Featured By Owner Nov 6, 2013  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
There will be TG later. But not as Hiroko's replacement.
Reply
:iconmkalut:
MKalut Featured By Owner Nov 6, 2013
But she'll need a replacement on the grounds that if she doesn't have someone to fight soon she will grow bored and resort to chasing cheese wheels down a hill like most civilized people do.
Reply
:iconmegaman0591:
megaman0591 Featured By Owner Nov 6, 2013
:iconyao-mingplz:
Reply
:iconspawnfan:
spawnfan Featured By Owner Nov 6, 2013  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
You'll just have to wait and see. 

Also she threw the other half of the scepter away so it's only a whip for her. A scepter might have more royal qualifications, but a whip is much sexier. Plus maybe she's discovering her inner Dominatrix. :D 
Reply
:iconmkalut:
MKalut Featured By Owner Nov 7, 2013
She threw the other half away?  She discarded the half that contained the foci used to channel your powers and enhance them?  The half that would have been far more powerful?  The half she could have turned in to an sphere which is also symbolic of royal power and retained it's full power and she tossed it?  All for a whip that looks like it has terrible reach.  This girl is just begging to be destroyed down the road.

On a side note if anyone is willing to risk their life to get that other half of the scepter I'm sure several of the TG writers here could get together and restore it to it's full power than mail it to some random boy to make a replacement.
Reply
:iconmegaman0591:
megaman0591 Featured By Owner Nov 6, 2013
:iconpervplz:
Reply
:iconmathmeistro:
mathmeistro Featured By Owner Nov 6, 2013
That leg shot...
Reply
:iconderpyfan4eva:
Derpyfan4eva Featured By Owner Nov 6, 2013
Just sayin, I called it ages ago and I'm STILL on hold.
Reply
:iconmegaman0591:
megaman0591 Featured By Owner Nov 6, 2013
:iconmingplz:
Reply
:iconderpyfan4eva:
Derpyfan4eva Featured By Owner Nov 8, 2013
It's true. I called it since page one. And then spawnfan said it wasn't going to happen! Brilliant! XD
Reply
:iconspawnfan:
spawnfan Featured By Owner Nov 12, 2013  Hobbyist Traditional Artist

What?

 

 

Reply
:iconfaketsuki:
FakeTsuki Featured By Owner Nov 6, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
Mind power changes the once eloquent of magical girl rods into a whippppppp!
Reply
:icontheguywhoreviewgames:
TheGuyWhoReviewGames Featured By Owner Nov 6, 2013
so...how many pages left intill her transformation to evil is complete?
Reply
:iconspawnfan:
spawnfan Featured By Owner Nov 6, 2013  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
It is now. But don't worry, there's still plenty of story to go.
Reply
:iconundertaker972:
Undertaker972 Featured By Owner Nov 6, 2013
Dark Queen Hiroko, has a nice ring to it
Reply
:iconsapphirefoxx:
SapphireFoxx Featured By Owner Nov 6, 2013
This is what this page made me think of:

:iconmasterchiefplz: I need a weapon.

:iconcaptainkeyesplz: I don't keep it loaded, so you'll have to find ammo along the way.
Reply
:iconastrofan1993:
astrofan1993 Featured By Owner Nov 6, 2013
LOL, I never even thought of that!  Gotta love Halo!  :D
Reply
:iconsunny-temple:
sunny-temple Featured By Owner Nov 6, 2013
Oooh.   And I like the subtle changes to her heels too.
Reply
:iconspawnfan:
spawnfan Featured By Owner Nov 6, 2013  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
That's just my inability to draw consistently. :P
Reply
:icondieguexxx:
dieguexxx Featured By Owner Nov 6, 2013
excelent choice 
Reply
:iconknight-bishop:
Knight-BIshop Featured By Owner Nov 6, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
A whip is a most excellent choice
Reply
:icona1993:
a1993 Featured By Owner Nov 6, 2013
uh oh... game over she lost she couldnt resist
Reply
:icontghawk555:
tghawk555 Featured By Owner Nov 5, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
She's standing at an angle...?
Reply
:iconkillerkris113:
killerkris113 Featured By Owner Nov 6, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
I would imagine it's due to the heels. It's healthier on the back to angle yourself a little when wearing them to prevent future back pains. It also helps maintain balance. I don't wear then (I'm a dude, with monsterously sized feet... duh), but I have researched them for stories and the like.
Reply
:iconpuke456:
puke456 Featured By Owner Nov 7, 2013
Leaning back on heels isn't particularly comfortable, leaning back at all isn't great ^^
Reply
:iconkillerkris113:
killerkris113 Featured By Owner Nov 7, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
Thanks for the insight.
Reply
:iconspawnfan:
spawnfan Featured By Owner Nov 6, 2013  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
It's cause sometimes I don't draw so good. :P
Reply
:iconkillerkris113:
killerkris113 Featured By Owner Nov 7, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
Ah, I see xD
Reply
:iconpuke456:
puke456 Featured By Owner Nov 6, 2013
Yeah she's got a bit of a lean going on, I assume it's got windy.

Reply
:icontghawk555:
tghawk555 Featured By Owner Nov 6, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
An eeeeeeevil breeze...
Reply
:iconlittlemisstg:
LittleMissTG Featured By Owner Nov 5, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
and so the circle of life is now complete
-Luke

*whacks with baton* stupid boy
 -Louise
Reply
:iconmkalut:
MKalut Featured By Owner Nov 6, 2013
I don't know where that's from but it just made me laugh.
Reply
:iconlittlemisstg:
LittleMissTG Featured By Owner Nov 8, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
Its from lukes stupid mind
-Louise

A bit harsh isnt it babe?
-Luke

Hell no if anything i was being polite
-Louise
Reply
Add a Comment:
 
×




Details

Submitted on
November 5, 2013
Image Size
582 KB
Resolution
2024×1471
Link
Thumb
Embed

Stats

Views
16,413
Favourites
101 (who?)
Comments
39
Downloads
97
×