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Be Careful What You Wish For TG 7 by spawnfan Be Careful What You Wish For TG 7 by spawnfan
Comission for :iconjay-jutsu:

Plot/Character Design/Dialogue: :iconjay-jutsu:
Art: :iconspawnfan:

Watch for this guy, he's got some amazing ideas coming up.

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Zoogoo40 Featured By Owner Jul 22, 2012  Student General Artist
This is like all your other TGs, good, but there is one thing that erks me a little, her t-shirt looks flat because the face isn't warped because of her chest, if you would like the breasts to look little "bigger" or stand out more, shade lightly under her breasts a little bit.

The tgs always seem to be in about the same position, it would make it more interesting if you occasionally tried some new poses and a little more dynamic shading wouldn't hurt.

Other than that, I feel that these pages are of a constant quality and are interesting to read. I hope that you take some of this into account, They are just suggestions that may help you. :)

sincerely, Zoogoo. :D
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Belva83 Featured By Owner Jul 22, 2012  Hobbyist Digital Artist
Nice Draw and story XD !!!
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coredumperror Featured By Owner Jul 22, 2012
Hah, it looks like his shirt is smirking at her! ;)
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:iconjay-jutsu:
Jay-jutsu Featured By Owner Jul 22, 2012
that's a Bon Jovi t-shirt.
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:iconstukablitz:
Stukablitz Featured By Owner Jul 22, 2012
He looks scared I guess i would be too.
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:iconchicken-yuki:
Chicken-Yuki Featured By Owner Jul 21, 2012   Traditional Artist
It kinda looks like the person's inhaling to take in their gut at first...
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spawnfan Featured By Owner Jul 21, 2012  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
Just a different way I wanted to show him/her getting smaller.

Admittedly it didn't come out so great.
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:iconjay-jutsu:
Jay-jutsu Featured By Owner Jul 22, 2012
it came out just fine. don't worry.
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:iconchicken-yuki:
Chicken-Yuki Featured By Owner Jul 21, 2012   Traditional Artist
:shrug:

What can ya do?
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SergeantGrif Featured By Owner Jul 21, 2012
nice.
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